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高考英語作文欣賞及評(píng)析
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【北京卷】
【試題回放】
情景作文
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國(guó)的號(hào)召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動(dòng)的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動(dòng)”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。
注意：詞數(shù)不少于60
提示詞：郊區(qū) suburbs
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點(diǎn)連貫，在語言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達(dá)。
【北京卷】
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開放作文
請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容，發(fā)散表達(dá)�？忌攸c(diǎn)要看出這個(gè)人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國(guó)人，要體會(huì)到西式刀叉對(duì)中式食物的矛盾性。行文結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。
【全國(guó)卷I海南、寧夏】
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假定你是李華，正在英國(guó)接受英語培訓(xùn)，住在一戶英國(guó)人家里。今天你的房東Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你準(zhǔn)備外出，請(qǐng)給Mrs. Wilson 寫一留言條，內(nèi)容包括：
1.外出購物
2.替房東還書
3.Tracy 來電話留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消
2)此事已告知Susan
3) 盡快回電
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Mrs. Wilson,
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]
本文屬于提綱式要點(diǎn)作文，是學(xué)生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該注意實(shí)用性，生活型的原則。行文人稱、時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)、準(zhǔn)確，各個(gè)要點(diǎn)間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達(dá)不是簡(jiǎn)單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細(xì)組織語言，合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)。在語言方面，要特別注意簡(jiǎn)潔明了，開頭要開門見山。
【全國(guó)卷】
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假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國(guó)圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”。現(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫一封信：
1、 自我介紹;2、 祝賀蘇琳生日;3、 感謝工作人員;4、 索取蘇琳三歲生日照。
注意：
1、詞數(shù)100左右;2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3、開頭語已為你寫好。
例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.自我介紹;2.信息來源;3.祝賀生日;4.感謝照顧;5.索取照片;6.合適的結(jié)尾。
這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語均表達(dá)到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準(zhǔn)確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對(duì)美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長(zhǎng)短句運(yùn)用合理，結(jié)合了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。
積累卡片英漢互譯
好詞
1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快樂的 2.express v.表達(dá) 3.give birth to v.產(chǎn)生，生育
好句
I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
我祝福它生日快樂并且對(duì)你們的辛勤工作表達(dá)我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國(guó)過著幸福和健康的生活。
評(píng)析：定語從句的使用。
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