高考英語試題回顧及滿分作文評析
以下是小編整理的高考英語試題回顧及滿分作文評析，歡迎閱讀。
【全國卷Ⅲ】(四川、云南、陜西等地區(qū)用)
【試題回放】
假設(shè)你是李華，最近國內(nèi)一家英文報(bào)紙正在討論北京動(dòng)物園是否應(yīng)遷出市區(qū)。以下是你所在班級討論的情況。請你給該報(bào)寫一封信，反映討論結(jié)果。
贊成遷出：反對遷出：
1.游客多，交通堵塞
2.郊區(qū)環(huán)境好
1.建于1906年，中外聞名
2.搬遷易造成動(dòng)物死亡
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100字左右，信的開頭已為你寫好。
2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3.參考詞匯： 郊區(qū)—suburb
Dear Editor ,
Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
[名師點(diǎn)評]
這篇文章寫得還是比較精彩的。要點(diǎn)表達(dá)得完整而準(zhǔn)確，清楚展示了主題。先提出了文章的主題，進(jìn)而列出了贊成的觀點(diǎn)及其相關(guān)的理由，同時(shí)在其后又給出了反面的觀點(diǎn)，論據(jù)十分充足。文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，前后連貫。
【全國卷I】
【試題回放】
假定你是李華，正是英國牛津參加短期語言培訓(xùn)，計(jì)劃星期天去倫敦旅游�；ヂ�(lián)網(wǎng)上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確(箭頭所指內(nèi)容)。請給該旅行社發(fā)一封電子郵件，詢問有關(guān)情況。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右，信的格式已為你寫好。
2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3.參考詞匯：牛津——Oxford 費(fèi)用——fee
Dear Sir/Madame,
I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.
As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?
How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名師點(diǎn)評]
本文是根據(jù)畫面的.提示來寫一封電子郵件。作者在文章中首先把握了全部的要點(diǎn)，敘述較為完整;其次，作者運(yùn)用一些過渡句和銜接詞將文章串聯(lián)，意思連貫。文章中采用了第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，這是值得肯定的地方。
【北京卷】
【試題回放】
第一節(jié)情景作文(20分)
美國中學(xué)生jeff將要來你所在的紅星中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)中文，經(jīng)協(xié)商安排住在你家。假設(shè)你是李華，請給Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來中國后的生活安排。
注意：
1. 信的開頭已為你寫好。
2.詞數(shù)不少于60。
Dear Jeff,
I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
[名師點(diǎn)評]
這篇文章的特點(diǎn)還是比較清晰的，第一，作者根據(jù)圖畫將文章的要點(diǎn)概括完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)而豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有層次感;第二，本文沒有采用華麗的辭藻，但用詞十分恰當(dāng)，段落過渡自然，令人耳目一新。
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