有關(guān)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作技巧
簡(jiǎn)潔才是美
好的寫(xiě)作，首先而且至關(guān)重要的一點(diǎn)就是簡(jiǎn)潔。繁冗的.寫(xiě)作堆砌了許多無(wú)用的詞藻，反而減弱表述的清晰度。當(dāng)然，也不能僅僅因?yàn)楹?jiǎn)短就認(rèn)為短句一定優(yōu)于長(zhǎng)句。只要一個(gè)單詞確實(shí)能起到一定的作用，它就應(yīng)該留在句中。一般來(lái)說(shuō)，只有在進(jìn)行強(qiáng)調(diào)或修飾、美化句子時(shí)，才能使用重復(fù)的單詞、語(yǔ)音和短語(yǔ)。修改文章，就是要?jiǎng)h繁就簡(jiǎn)。比較下面這對(duì)句子，注意體會(huì)二者的差別及效果。
1) Dr. Sun Yat-sen went to Japan by means of a big boat.
2) Dr. Sun Yat-sen went to Japan by boat.
斜體字部分較啰嗦，因?yàn)?quot;by"就是"by means of boat"。
請(qǐng)看下列例句
Wordy: It makes me feel painful to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week.
Better: It pains me to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week.
Wordy: It will be our aim to ensure proper health care for each and every one of the Chinese people.
Better: Our aim is to ensure proper health care for all Chinese.
Wordy: This book will help you master the basic elements of good writing.
Better: This book will help you master the basics of good writing.
Wordy: The search of the forest that they conducted was entirely complete.
Better: The search of the forest was complete.
或They conducted a complete search of the forest.
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