英語四級(jí)考前熱點(diǎn)高分范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Moonlight Clan. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)現(xiàn)在很多年輕人每個(gè)月都把自己賺的錢花光，他們被稱作“月光族”
2)有人認(rèn)為這是一種時(shí)尚的消費(fèi)觀念，但很多人反對(duì)這樣消費(fèi)
3)我對(duì)此的看法是……
The Moonlight Clan
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行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)針對(duì)該現(xiàn)象提出兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇钡目捶�，由此可判斷本文�?yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述“月光族”現(xiàn)象，引出對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象的不同看法;對(duì)比闡述兩種看法各自的理由;表明“我”對(duì)“月光族”的看法并說明理由。
高分范文
The Moonlight Clan
Nowadays, more and more people, [1]especially the young are joining in the army of “the moonlight clan”. These people exhaust their earnings every month without any savings. [2]Many people think this is a fashionable life style, [2]while more other people object to this kind of consumption style.
[3]Those who support “the moonlight clan” think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality. [3]However, more other people criticize “the moonlight clan”. They say that the consumption habit of “the moonlight clan” is unhealthy and sometimes wasteful. In addition, no savings will [4]place “the moonlight clan” in a difficult position [5]in case of unexpected expenses.
[6]Weighing these two arguments, I prefer to the latter one. In my eyes, [7]though “the moonlight clan” may acquire temporary satisfaction from their consumption, [8]in the long term, it [9]is unfavorable to their family and career. [10]Just as a proverb says, one should always prepare for a rainy day.
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
[1]“尤其，特別”。
[2]用于提出兩種對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)。
[3]用于引出兩種對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)各自的理由。
[4]“使…處于艱難的境地”。
[5]“以防，萬一”。
[6]用于表明“我”的傾向。
[7]though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句。
[8]“從長遠(yuǎn)來看”。
[9]“對(duì)…不利”。
[10]引用諺語結(jié)尾，值得借鑒。
佳句臨摩
1.佳句：Many people think this is a fashionable life style, while more other people object to this kind of consumption style.
臨摩：勇敢的人往往會(huì)獲得更多的機(jī)會(huì)，而懦弱的'人面對(duì)機(jī)會(huì)也有可能錯(cuò)過。
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2.佳句：Those who support “the moonlight clan” think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality.
臨摩：持悲觀態(tài)度的那些人認(rèn)為地球上有限的能源很快就會(huì)枯竭。
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3.佳句：Just as a proverb says, o
, one should always prepare for a rainy day.
臨摩：正如一句諺語所說的，“機(jī)會(huì)只給那些有準(zhǔn)備的人。”
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【KEY】
1. Brave people tend to get more opportunities while timid ones may miss them when chances come.
2. Those who hold pessimistic attitudes think that limited energy on earth will be exhausted soon.
3. Just as a proverb says, “Opportunities are only for the prepared minds.”
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